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Oh Dearly Beloved Siren of the Seas that dances in the moon's streams,
behold your callous heart so cold,
Yet you harbor kindness to every living being in this world.
You are the remedy of all unnatural, the savoiur of the condemned...
You never see things as putrid or disgust.
Your eyes can tell the beauty of a being... like me...

Eyes... those dazzling ruby eyes of your's that glimmers in such cloudy essence...
Your skin... so pure... so white... so pale as the moon...
Your raven-black hair is so beautiful and your dress is absolutely stunning...
Your hands... so feminine...  Your lips adorn in glorious red.
And your voice... its such a soothing song of an angel's...

Oh lovely Angel of Death... If only you could hear me calling out your name in worship and love...
If only your eyes could set foot to mine and notice me adoring you, your caressing voice and your wonderful dance...
Oh God, for just one moment... Please stop time and only me and my lady could take motion...
Ophelia... your name that echos through my mind...
Ophelia... the maiden who will drown in the hidden midst of my undying pleasure...
Ophelia... who shall be mine...

I Love you so much...


This may sound absurd for you but it's true...

I'm not stupid but blind.
I cry yet I laugh.
I get angry then forgive.
I fall yet i stand.

In a world full of dementia and emptiness...

I always think about you...


I wish I could show you in my way how much I value you. It wasn't like decades or a century that I've known you, but what you've shown me is enough for me to treasure you for a lifetime...

Every moment I need you...
I want you near me...
I want you here with me...
I want you to be mine and mine alone...
I want you forever...
My lips die to touch your's...
My claws die to touch you...

Your lips upon my lips. Your skin upon my skin.
That would be...
Our Sweetest Sin...
Don't hate me pipz coz I'm REALLY one romantic person when it comes to inspiration..
Here, we see Ophelia dancing along with her theme, Danse Macabre(by Camille Saint -Saens-) at the Queen of Heart's throne room.
It's an entertainment for the Queen Of Hearts and then, one of her soldiers heard the music& came to see what it is. Yes, The Jabberwock was the one who came to watch.
And y' know what? He fell inlove. X3 yayz! :iconpanicatthediscoplz:

And... I think.. This'll be the part how they first met.

Hows the poem I wrote? :3

Ophelia (c) Me
Jabberwock (c) American Mcgee's Alice
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FrameofReality Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG LOVE IT! ^^ It's so romantic, lol.
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SkitzOpheliac Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thanks! ;w;
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FrameofReality Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome, lolz.
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choxie-chan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2009
OMG! YOU MADE IT SOO POETIC! like if it we're a real poet! seriously! that's amazing!
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SkitzOpheliac Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
why thank you there!! ^^
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Chikageplz Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009
Love your poetry in motion. >W<
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SkitzOpheliac Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks!
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Zelman-Clock Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009
Oh darling... 83
You're good at writing romantic stuff!
But... he kinda ound so horny because he longs for her. ^^"
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SkitzOpheliac Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Why thank you! ^w^
I know..that's the point.. :devil:

And... kamusta na da LGW fanfic mu? I wanna read more of Jabby. 83
Why'd you have to make Ophy as Alyss!? She could've been Redd! Redd is cooler!
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Zelman-Clock Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009
haha! That's my goth!

Hm? You wanna read MORE? :iconweeplz:

I thought you hate Redd and you want Ophy to be Alyss. But now, YOU WANT OPHY TO BE REDD!?
Dear naman. It's just my revised version. Si Redd na actually kag... some dood. Not Jaberwock..

I made Ophy as... Redd/ Alyss then Jabberwock ang dayunan ya.
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